Okay, I didn't kill him. I thought about it, though, but a spark of a notion from a week ago reemerged and came to his rescue.
Protagonist gets another chance to redeem himself, because I changed him from vanilla to french vanilla.
No, not the sort of french vanilla with an outrageous accent, you silly king. No, this is the kind where I took Mr. Boring and added a bit of the charming rogue to him. The journey through the book will find him not only emerging from the bounds of his own making (familiar to me, I admit), but embracing and incorporating the bolder side of himself.
Yeah, when stated in this manner, it doesn't seem epic. This change of character is a subplot, of course, and it's in its early stages. I have only finished a basic outline for chapters one through three, so who knows what will happen?
And her, I see her and I need to keep my distance, lest I fear letting the story happen to her. She's what I want for myself, which makes me perilously capable of protecting her when I should not. Mr. French Vanilla has to take my place. Whether or not I punish him for it along the way, I don't know. Yet.
Yes! Already intriguing.
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